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Friday 26 August 2016

poem



this friday I made a poem for this weeks writing equation .It was fun I made a poem about a house we need to use  nouns,three adjectives a verb and adverb and a ending with two adjectives 

1 comment:

  1. Hello Brianna.

    Thanks for your illustrated poem. It's quite fun. You've correctly coloured the words, which is great, but "fast" is not an adverb. The word you need to use instead is "quickly", so: The funky, groovy, cool house ran quickly to the yummy, tasty ice cream truck.

    What other qualities can you describe about the house and truck? Funky, groovy, and cool all describe how fun something is, so they are not describing different qualities. Yummy and tasty are describing the same thing as well.

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