film festival 2016

On Wensday it was film festival.I got so exited to see other movies from other school in are cluster.I liked the making choices movie from tamaki primary. i had really fun on the buses to travel their.     

blog comment to tamaki

  

 This week LS1 had to comment to schools in a cluster after the film festival 2016.

rockets

LI:How technology expands human development
this week we done flight for inquiry. we learnt about rockets with mr O .I am in team A so we are with mr O for inquiry

brianna

how planes fly

LI: to identify features of an explanation text
LI: to infer information from the text.
this week for inquiry we have been doing flight. so for reading we read a book about how planes fly

Maths

LI: to accurately collect data

this week we had to make charts of maths groups in lS1 on witch animal they like the most.  

Compare & Contrast

LI:to understand the purpose of an explanation

this week for writing we done a compare and contrast of a information report.we also learnt about it. we had to make a   explanation and a report on a  ven  diagram.    

powtoon

powtoon

for cyber smarts we had to create a powtoon

story starter

I need to write a story about having a vacation at a theme park with a cousin that stays their for a week And I hope you like my  story that I made. :)

Flight DLO

LI: to investigate the effect of wing area on lift.

this week for Group A has learnt about flight.In groups of three we had to make a DLO of what we done with are homemade paper helicopers.

flying free

LI:to use QAR to comprehend questions 

this week we have doing a DLO about this book  Te pounamu & I have been reading.It's about a girl named Anna,and she makes a kite.

narrative - edit

Sentence - how would you react if you see a candy bar with powers

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Their was a scientist named dr.James brown.he was a skilled scientist he never made mistakes ,but that one faithful day that happened . D.r James brown was doing a experience in 1998.he put sugar,spice and everything nice in a pot.then he spilled in chemical candy in the pot on accident.BOOM BANG! Went the pot.the pot explode and their was a candy bar.a really huge one.it was the size of a man.it looked liked a muscly man  . d.r James brown wanted to eat it ,but he just left it in a big bird’s nest he created in 1980 for a bird’s nest competition .

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When d.r James brown was in his room writing in his journal about his failed experiment

24/7/1998  Experiment number 298 went wrong instead of making a lemonade ice cream  i made a candy bar.I don’t know what would happen if i ate it so i left it in my big bird’s nest i created in 1980. It looked strange. it was a size of muscly man .. It was a rainbow color,it’s shape was like all the candy bars in the world combined into one candy bar. What is the mayor going to say about this .

When d.r James brown was asleep. The huge candy bar was in the huge bird nest.he moved like a real human.The candy bar was strong.The candy bar fell over and SMASHED!.  D.r James brown’s unbreakable table.D.r James brown woke up ,and called the police.when the  police arrived they got their guns up because they  heard a whoosh and something  smashed to the ground.then they  splitted up. Two groups saw nothing but one group was calling all of the police where the are.they saw a big candy bar that looked like a man .it was walking.  Once  every police arrived they tried to capture it. But  what they used could not stop the huge candy bar .’ It’s a villain “. the police said. “We  must get super man “. the police said. So they did,in a flash super man arrived.super man sawed the candy bar and it was a battle between super man and the candy bar with super powers.

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There  was the battle superman vs super candy bar . “ WAIT, that's my experiment”.Said d.r James brown rushing out of his bedroom.. “ your  experiment “.said superman and the police. “yes,I tried to make lemonade ice cream on the 24th of July,I was so confused when I  failed.I was like .what is the mayor going to say about this. Then i put it in the bird's nest  I created during the early 80’s.please don’t hurt him.he means a lot to me.” replied D.r James brown. So when D.r James brown showed the candy bar to the city.the mayor loved it. “This big candy  bar with super powers is going to be in  the justice league.It is going to be called super bar.” said the mayor, and that was the end

LI:to edit narrative work using the TEE structure

This week we had to edit are narrative that we wrote 2 weeks ago.I edit mines and made my story about a candy bar with super powers.We had to change the text to red because it is are edit color we had to use

brianna

questions - week 4

LI:to comprehend word problems

this week for m.r O'S LS1's maths group's we had to make are own word problems for other people in are group's to solve.it was very fun.we had to make these word problem's with a partner or yourself. I chose yourself. I hope you like it

brianna  

candy bar with super powers - edit

Sentence - how would you react if you see a candy bar with powers

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Once there was a Candy bar that lived in the new york sewers,but he was not just any ordinary candybar ,but a candy bar that  had super powers.

The candy bar never had a friend. Although the candy bar that lived in the sewers, and for some days the candybar sneaked in 24 cric street alley way .the candy bar wished that he was a human

That was the candy bars only dream

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One day the candy bar tried to do a disguise to get food , but when he got back to the sewers a little boy followed the candy bar.the boy ask the candy bar “hello sir”. “Ahh” said the candybar.the candy bar ran away from the boy .the boy started crying.the candy bar heard the boy cry ,and felt so sorry for the little boy.so the candy bar went to the boy ,then took him outside the sewers trying to find his mother that the boy was with before he  than

followed the candy bar.the candy bar grabbed the boy's hand then said “hang on”.the boy hanged on to the candy bar’s hand and then the candy bar went up to the sky like a blazing rocket .

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The candy bar ask the boy if he could see his mom.the boy pointed to rihanna the singer. “Is rihanna your mom”.ask the candy bar. “No not rihanna the one next to her”.oh okay. so the candy bar flew to the mother ,but the mother never sawed him and kept walking to her apartment.the candy bar used its super speed and he was fast like a cheetah.when the candy bar made it to her apartment and knock on her door. “Hello miam I think this is your sun” said the candy bar.the mother then hugged the boy and said thank you sir to the candy bar.

So that is the end of the candy bar story how saves a little  boy . will that be his only friend ?.no this story is just the beginning

LI:to edit narritive work usieng TEE stractures.
this week we had to edit our narritive that we created.we also needed to do was delete some words and if you put more words in it has to be red.

maths week 3 & 4

LI; To choose “the best” strategy to solve the problem

this week for maths we need to do a google slide to make a own word problem with are multiple . I hope you like my slides.and the best part is that you can solve the questions.

brianna

Table Master

This is a can do that I did i did 2 times table and i got 29 seconds I came third for the chart.

blog comment to rachel

this is my comment to rachel.I comment rachel .I loved rachel's work.it looked great. it was a narrative .

strategy place mat T4W2

LI: To comprehend word problems

this week I done word problems with my group taupo and my teacher mr ogilvie.I had fun doing this.It was hard so I worked with a buddy named joseph.we need to solve a question. using a stratgey place mat

migration

LI:How technology expands human development

How society and environments impact on and are influenced by technology past, present and future.

this week for inquiry we are learning about migration.migration is like traveling.we had to pair up in buddies . my buddy was chavda . Chavda and I done equal work and I think we have done well.I hope you like this presentation.

simple,complex and compound

Sentence - how would you react if you see a candy bar with powers

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Once there was a Candy bar that was in new york ,but he was not just any ordinary candybar ,but had super powers.

The candy bar never had a friend. Although candy bar lived in the sewers, for some days the candybar  sneaked in a alley way .the candy bar wished that he was a human with superpowers.

That was his only dream in the candy bars life.

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One day the candy bar tried to do a disguise to get food , but when he got back to the sewers a little boy followed the candy bar.the boy ask the candy bar “hello sir”. “Ahh” said the candybar.  As the candy bar ran away from the boy, then the boy started crying.the candy bar heard the boy cry and felt so sorry for the little boy.so the candy bar went to the boy ,then took him outside the sewers trying to find his mother that the boy was with before he  than

followed the candy bar.the candy bar grabbed the boy's hand then said “hang on”.the boy hanged on to the candy bar’s hand and then the candy bar went up to the sky like a blazing rocket .

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The candy bar ask the boy if he could see his mom.the boy pointed to rihanna the singer. “Is rihanna your mom”.ask the candy bar. “No not rihanna the one next to her”.oh okay. so the candy bar flew to the mother ,but the mother never sawed him and kept walking to her apartment.the candy bar used its super speed and he was fast like a cheetah.when the candy bar made it to her apartment and knock on her door. “Hello miam I think this is your sun” said the candy bar.the mother then hugged the boy and said thank you sir to the candy bar.

So that is the end of the candy bar with super powers.but is that his only journey he will have?will there be anyone how can save other world problems.It can only be SUPER CANDY BAR  

Billy Jimbob

LI: To use QAR to help answer comprehension questions
this is my presentation of Billy Jimbob. billy Jimbob is a character in the story billy Jimbob.It is about a boy name william james roberts how created a lot of inventions .some people in the story call him Billy Jimbob because he is so smart he made a rokcet ship.