film festival 2016

On Wensday it was film festival.I got so exited to see other movies from other school in are cluster.I liked the making choices movie from tamaki primary. i had really fun on the buses to travel their.     

blog comment to tamaki

  

 This week LS1 had to comment to schools in a cluster after the film festival 2016.

rockets

LI:How technology expands human development
this week we done flight for inquiry. we learnt about rockets with mr O .I am in team A so we are with mr O for inquiry

brianna

how planes fly

LI: to identify features of an explanation text
LI: to infer information from the text.
this week for inquiry we have been doing flight. so for reading we read a book about how planes fly

Maths

LI: to accurately collect data

this week we had to make charts of maths groups in lS1 on witch animal they like the most.  

Compare & Contrast

LI:to understand the purpose of an explanation

this week for writing we done a compare and contrast of a information report.we also learnt about it. we had to make a   explanation and a report on a  ven  diagram.    

powtoon

powtoon

for cyber smarts we had to create a powtoon

story starter

I need to write a story about having a vacation at a theme park with a cousin that stays their for a week And I hope you like my  story that I made. :)

Flight DLO

LI: to investigate the effect of wing area on lift.

this week for Group A has learnt about flight.In groups of three we had to make a DLO of what we done with are homemade paper helicopers.

flying free

LI:to use QAR to comprehend questions 

this week we have doing a DLO about this book  Te pounamu & I have been reading.It's about a girl named Anna,and she makes a kite.

narrative - edit

Sentence - how would you react if you see a candy bar with powers

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Their was a scientist named dr.James brown.he was a skilled scientist he never made mistakes ,but that one faithful day that happened . D.r James brown was doing a experience in 1998.he put sugar,spice and everything nice in a pot.then he spilled in chemical candy in the pot on accident.BOOM BANG! Went the pot.the pot explode and their was a candy bar.a really huge one.it was the size of a man.it looked liked a muscly man  . d.r James brown wanted to eat it ,but he just left it in a big bird’s nest he created in 1980 for a bird’s nest competition .

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When d.r James brown was in his room writing in his journal about his failed experiment

24/7/1998  Experiment number 298 went wrong instead of making a lemonade ice cream  i made a candy bar.I don’t know what would happen if i ate it so i left it in my big bird’s nest i created in 1980. It looked strange. it was a size of muscly man .. It was a rainbow color,it’s shape was like all the candy bars in the world combined into one candy bar. What is the mayor going to say about this .

When d.r James brown was asleep. The huge candy bar was in the huge bird nest.he moved like a real human.The candy bar was strong.The candy bar fell over and SMASHED!.  D.r James brown’s unbreakable table.D.r James brown woke up ,and called the police.when the  police arrived they got their guns up because they  heard a whoosh and something  smashed to the ground.then they  splitted up. Two groups saw nothing but one group was calling all of the police where the are.they saw a big candy bar that looked like a man .it was walking.  Once  every police arrived they tried to capture it. But  what they used could not stop the huge candy bar .’ It’s a villain “. the police said. “We  must get super man “. the police said. So they did,in a flash super man arrived.super man sawed the candy bar and it was a battle between super man and the candy bar with super powers.

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There  was the battle superman vs super candy bar . “ WAIT, that's my experiment”.Said d.r James brown rushing out of his bedroom.. “ your  experiment “.said superman and the police. “yes,I tried to make lemonade ice cream on the 24th of July,I was so confused when I  failed.I was like .what is the mayor going to say about this. Then i put it in the bird's nest  I created during the early 80’s.please don’t hurt him.he means a lot to me.” replied D.r James brown. So when D.r James brown showed the candy bar to the city.the mayor loved it. “This big candy  bar with super powers is going to be in  the justice league.It is going to be called super bar.” said the mayor, and that was the end

LI:to edit narrative work using the TEE structure

This week we had to edit are narrative that we wrote 2 weeks ago.I edit mines and made my story about a candy bar with super powers.We had to change the text to red because it is are edit color we had to use

brianna

questions - week 4

LI:to comprehend word problems

this week for m.r O'S LS1's maths group's we had to make are own word problems for other people in are group's to solve.it was very fun.we had to make these word problem's with a partner or yourself. I chose yourself. I hope you like it

brianna  

candy bar with super powers - edit

Sentence - how would you react if you see a candy bar with powers

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Once there was a Candy bar that lived in the new york sewers,but he was not just any ordinary candybar ,but a candy bar that  had super powers.

The candy bar never had a friend. Although the candy bar that lived in the sewers, and for some days the candybar sneaked in 24 cric street alley way .the candy bar wished that he was a human

That was the candy bars only dream

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One day the candy bar tried to do a disguise to get food , but when he got back to the sewers a little boy followed the candy bar.the boy ask the candy bar “hello sir”. “Ahh” said the candybar.the candy bar ran away from the boy .the boy started crying.the candy bar heard the boy cry ,and felt so sorry for the little boy.so the candy bar went to the boy ,then took him outside the sewers trying to find his mother that the boy was with before he  than

followed the candy bar.the candy bar grabbed the boy's hand then said “hang on”.the boy hanged on to the candy bar’s hand and then the candy bar went up to the sky like a blazing rocket .

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The candy bar ask the boy if he could see his mom.the boy pointed to rihanna the singer. “Is rihanna your mom”.ask the candy bar. “No not rihanna the one next to her”.oh okay. so the candy bar flew to the mother ,but the mother never sawed him and kept walking to her apartment.the candy bar used its super speed and he was fast like a cheetah.when the candy bar made it to her apartment and knock on her door. “Hello miam I think this is your sun” said the candy bar.the mother then hugged the boy and said thank you sir to the candy bar.

So that is the end of the candy bar story how saves a little  boy . will that be his only friend ?.no this story is just the beginning

LI:to edit narritive work usieng TEE stractures.
this week we had to edit our narritive that we created.we also needed to do was delete some words and if you put more words in it has to be red.

maths week 3 & 4

LI; To choose “the best” strategy to solve the problem

this week for maths we need to do a google slide to make a own word problem with are multiple . I hope you like my slides.and the best part is that you can solve the questions.

brianna

Table Master

This is a can do that I did i did 2 times table and i got 29 seconds I came third for the chart.

blog comment to rachel

this is my comment to rachel.I comment rachel .I loved rachel's work.it looked great. it was a narrative .

strategy place mat T4W2

LI: To comprehend word problems

this week I done word problems with my group taupo and my teacher mr ogilvie.I had fun doing this.It was hard so I worked with a buddy named joseph.we need to solve a question. using a stratgey place mat

migration

LI:How technology expands human development

How society and environments impact on and are influenced by technology past, present and future.

this week for inquiry we are learning about migration.migration is like traveling.we had to pair up in buddies . my buddy was chavda . Chavda and I done equal work and I think we have done well.I hope you like this presentation.

simple,complex and compound

Sentence - how would you react if you see a candy bar with powers

Complex

Compound

Simple

Paragraph 1

Once there was a Candy bar that was in new york ,but he was not just any ordinary candybar ,but had super powers.

The candy bar never had a friend. Although candy bar lived in the sewers, for some days the candybar  sneaked in a alley way .the candy bar wished that he was a human with superpowers.

That was his only dream in the candy bars life.

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One day the candy bar tried to do a disguise to get food , but when he got back to the sewers a little boy followed the candy bar.the boy ask the candy bar “hello sir”. “Ahh” said the candybar.  As the candy bar ran away from the boy, then the boy started crying.the candy bar heard the boy cry and felt so sorry for the little boy.so the candy bar went to the boy ,then took him outside the sewers trying to find his mother that the boy was with before he  than

followed the candy bar.the candy bar grabbed the boy's hand then said “hang on”.the boy hanged on to the candy bar’s hand and then the candy bar went up to the sky like a blazing rocket .

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The candy bar ask the boy if he could see his mom.the boy pointed to rihanna the singer. “Is rihanna your mom”.ask the candy bar. “No not rihanna the one next to her”.oh okay. so the candy bar flew to the mother ,but the mother never sawed him and kept walking to her apartment.the candy bar used its super speed and he was fast like a cheetah.when the candy bar made it to her apartment and knock on her door. “Hello miam I think this is your sun” said the candy bar.the mother then hugged the boy and said thank you sir to the candy bar.

So that is the end of the candy bar with super powers.but is that his only journey he will have?will there be anyone how can save other world problems.It can only be SUPER CANDY BAR  

Billy Jimbob

LI: To use QAR to help answer comprehension questions
this is my presentation of Billy Jimbob. billy Jimbob is a character in the story billy Jimbob.It is about a boy name william james roberts how created a lot of inventions .some people in the story call him Billy Jimbob because he is so smart he made a rokcet ship.

comment to angela

this is my blog  comment to angela. I done a blog comment to angela because she is not in my group for maths.I thought she done well for her studdyladder.

brianna   

flight,migration

This week we have done inquiry. are inquiry was migration. Migration is like movement.

brianna 

QAR

LI:To use QAR to help answer comprehension questions
this week we have learnt about qar from mr ogilvie .I have learnt alot from mr ogilvie.

brianna

simile and methpor

LI:to write narrative paragraphs using Topic sentence, Details, Concluding sentence.
this week we learnt about smile and methpor.simile and methpor has similer resons that are the same.

brianna

strategy place Mat

LI: To comprehend word problems

I learnt with mr ogilvie about word problems.

story staters

 

today I went on story starters.I went on adventure text .It told me to make a funny song about a loughing carrot that makes a tree house.I hope you like it

learning night 2016

this is a post about the learning night we had on thursday.It started at 6pm

maths poster

This is my maths poster of the 3 maths methods we learnt  my group and I had 1 choice.We learnt the algorithm.Then we need to go in groups.my group  was jack ofa and Me.jack tout me the japanese method and ofa tout   me the korean method  .I tout them the algorithm method
by brianna

dragon's egg on nick and karl

WALT:To  comprehend/ Inference information in a text.
This is my DLO on nick and karl.nick and karl a characters from the dragons egg.we need to create a Character Trait Summary about nick (the main character) and another person in the story. the other person i done was karl.karl is nick's little brother that got pranked.

by brianna

Valerie adams

this is my poster of Valerie adams. Valerie adams is a olympian I have done research on .

how to make a boiled egg

WALT:to make a procedural text
this is my presentation of how to make boiled eggs
i hope you like it

dragons egg

LI:to learn how to comprehend/inference a fictional text
This is my work on the dragons egg this is the character's inference poster

there is a link at the bottom.the link leeds you to the dragons egg questions





dragons egg questions

education - acrosstic poem

LI to use a range of vocabulary to make a picture in the readers mind
 I need to make a poem about education.

fiti - rugby with a jandal

LI:to compherd / infrencing  a fictional text
this is my work on infrencing.I have read a book called rugby with a jandal the main character  

maths

LI to use  the column method
Today I have done maths in my maths group.WE learnt about column method

inquiry

this is my inquiry
In my inquiry group I am with Mr oglvie

maths screenshot

this is  my screenshot of my maths.the one on top was the question.I didin't know the answer so I tried my best.but I got it wrong

guard for a day

During are reading We have read a text about a girl named kristine and she works on a train with her grandpa.She was a train guard for a day

aticross peom

                                              I have done An aticross peom for my writing equation today this                                                 thursday.It was fun.My teacher MR oglvie tought us this.we got to do
                                  are names or last names to do the aticross peom.I chossed my last  name
                                                             because it was more shorter
              brianna
 
                     

the warriors visit

This day was awsome we got to see the warriors is that cool.they were at are school.I also got a prize from then.the vodafone warriors we got to see was shun johnson ,ryan hoffmen and john pavali.It was the best assembly I have ever seen

poem

this friday I made a poem for this weeks writing equation .It was fun I made a poem about a house we need to use  nouns,three adjectives a verb and adverb and a ending with two adjectives

poem

this friday I made a poem for this weeks writing equation .It was fun I made a poem about a house we need to use  nouns,three adjectives a verb and adverb and a ending with two adjectives 

column method

WALT:add and subtract numbers using the column method
this thursday I have been doing column method for maths .We had to go on transum and do are basic addition level 4 and 5.we had to surt out what the answer was with are column method.I have put up a presentation of how to use the column method

rugby with a jandal

LI:to comprehend/ inference information in a fictional text
I have been inferencing in a text. The text was called rugby with a jandal.It is about a boy named fiti and his sister malia .they always play rugby in a villige that is in samoa.they used shoes for the goal post.they uesd a jandal for a rugby ball.but then  malia and fiti moved to new zealand

summarizing the main idea

 this Friday I have been summarizing  about weight lifting 

 

evaluaton. doc. coke

this friday i have done  a evaluation doc about a coca cola ad .

column method

  WALT:  add and subtract numbers  using column method
         
this friday I have used column method with my teacher mr oglvie . the picture on top of my writing is me doing my addition. it was hard doing my addition .
then i got my results.I didn't get them all right but i stilled tried

silivia & brianna ancient and modern olympics

we are in miss nikaers gourp for inquiry this term.We had to get in buddies and work together.My buudie was from LS2 and her name is silivia . we put this on are

Place value

I have been learning place values so I  thought that I could share my work to you.
My math group has learned place value with me.we did a place value house.I wanted to show you the place value house.take a look.

Story board of duck overboard

LI:to identify the main ideas in a text

1/7/16: today I made a storyboard about the story duck over board. It Is fun.We need to put the main ideas in oder in a little text.

My favourite sport

Duck Overboard

Duck Overboard

January 1992 a stupendous storm washed three containers off a ship that was bound from Hong Kong to Tacoma, Washington in the United States.

One container spilled its contents into the sea. No less than 29,000 plastic bath toys. After falling overboard, the sea water corroded the card-packaging and the plastic yellow ducks, blue turtles and green frogs broke free and began to go different directions. Some floating over the site where the Titanic sank, some landing in Hawaii and others even spending years frozen in an Arctic ice pack. They have landed on beaches in Indonesia, Australia, Japan, South America and North America and some have even been found fifteen years later and 17,000 kilometres away on the shores of Great Britain.

While the ducks are undoubtedly a loss to the bath-time fun of thousands of children, their adventures at sea have proved an invaluable aid to science. The toys have helped researchers to chart the great ocean currents because when they are spotted bobbing on the waves, they are much more likely to be reported to the authorities than the floats which scientists normally use. And because the toys are made of durable plastic and are sealed watertight, they have been able to survive years adrift at the mercy of the elements.

Curtis Ebbesmeyer, an American oceanographer has been tracking the floating plastic ducks around the world's oceans. He saw immediately how valuable the little toys would be to scientific research of the great ocean currents, the engine of the planet's entire climate.

Mr Ebbesmeyer said the toys are easy for beachcombers to spot because they have largely faded to white and have the words "The First Years" stamped upon them. So precious to science are they that the US firm that made them is offering a $100 reward for finding one.

What’s the Big Idea?

WHO: the american oceanographer Mr Ebbesmeyer

WHAT: the storm washed three containers off a ship .one broken open . 29,ooo bath toy went out of the broken bath toys.

WHERE: Ocean

WHY: because of a stupendous storm

WHEN: january 1992

HOW: of the great ocean currents

LI:to identify  the main ideas from the text

Reading holidays activity one

Today I done activity one of winter learning journey

Information about whales

Information about whales

blogpost requirements

Today I learnt how to do blogging.First we need The title then the picture of what  you did .then we need the two labels.and the blurb.

Whole term

DLO on whole term maths

area game

3/5/2016  I played the area maths game with my group.in  my group There was mele and te pounumu. we learnt how to play this game i hope you will to.

brianna brazil general knowledge

Brianna,rachel summarising

Text title: Iron tamariki

LI: To look for keywords and phrases

What is happening?	Run,swim,train,iron maori tamariki
Where is the event happening?	napier
Who is involved?	Mana,,dad
When is the event happening?	napier
Why did the event occur?	Training for competition
How did things get started?	dad training mana

Mana’s dad  is training Mana  for the iron tamariki competition.

What is happening?	swimming
Where is the event happening?	Napier swim pool
Who is involved?	mana,dad,sharon (mum)
When is the event happening?	napier
Why did the event occur?	Training for a competition
How did things get started?	Dad training mana

Mana's mum (sharon) has took mana to the swimming  pool to train for the competition.

What is happening?	reading ,having a shower
Where is the event happening?	At mana’s home
Who is involved?	Mana , dad
When is the event happening?	?
Why did the event occur?	Talking about Richie MCCaw
How did things get started?	Dad telling mana about when Richie MCCaw when he was Mana’s age

Mana got back from the napier pool and had a shower and  then they  were reading about Richie MCCaw.

What is happening?	Crowd going wild,dad and mum cheering Mana
Where is the event happening?	Napier beach
Who is involved?	Mana,mum,dad,nana, kids
When is the event happening?	After three months
Why did the event occur?	Orca,Groups,St
How did things get started?	Orca,Groups,Start Tomorrow.

Three months later the iron tamariki challenge arrived and mana’s whanau was cheering him

What is happening?	Mana is swimming,Mana is coming first
Where is the event happening?	Napier bay
Who is involved?	Mana ,The crowd of cheering People ,dad,sharon,nana,mum
When is the event happening?	After three months
Why did the event occur?	Mana is coming first in the competition
How did things get started?	When the loudspeaker said bang that was when Mana jumped into the water.

When the race started mana was in the lead  and then the crowd started cheering .

What is happening?	Mana is the first one on land,started running.kid’s went past mana
Where is the event happening?	A napier main road
Who is involved?	Nanny,Mana ,Dad,Sharon,Mum,the cheering crowd
When is the event happening?	Napier
Why did the event occur?	Kids went past mana,mana  is not worried
How did things get started?	When the kids went past him

Mana was the first kid on land so he put on shoes and started running then kids went past him and mana wasn’t worried .

What is happening?	Whanou hug,proud mana has won a bet
Where is the event happening?	At the napier beach
Who is involved?	Mana,,dad,nana,mum,sharon
When is the event happening?	napier
Why did the event occur?	Mana is getting a huge hug
How did things get started?	When he came 3 rd

Summarizing

Mana’s dad  is training Mana  for the iron tamariki competition.  Mana's mum (sharon) has took mana to the swimming  pool to train for the competition.Mana got back from the napier pool and had a shower and  then they  were reading about Richie MCCaw.Three months later the iron tamariki challenge arrived and mana’s family was cheering him.When the race started mana was in the lead  and then the crowd started cheering .Mana was the first kid on land so he put on shoes and started running then kids went past him and mana wasn’t worried .after the race mana earned a metal and dad was so impressed  from mana and mana's family gave him a big huge hug and had his favourite  dinner for a year.